Multimodal Composition and Vernor Vinge’s Rainbows End June 26, 2008
Posted by Jason Ellis in Kent State, Pedagogy, Personal, Review, Science Fiction.Tags: writing, vernorvinge, multimodal, composition, mediumisthemassage
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Over the summer, I’m taking an intensive, four week class on teaching college writing. The course is led by Dr. Brian Huot, Kent State University’s Writing Program Coordinator, and for three days this week, Dr. Pamela Takayoshi is introducing us to multimodal composition.
Multimodal composition is the use of media other than paper and pencil for rhetorical communication and composition. For example, blogs, Powerpoint presentations, Youtube videos, Podcasts, brochures etc. are other ways to make persuasive arguments and enter critical discourse. In multimodal composition, the printed essay does not reign supreme.
There seems to be a push in writing programs, which are increasingly influenced by the growth of rhetoric programs to the detriment of literature programs, to teach students to compose by any means available. This means that students should be encouraged to create arguments, whether it be with audio essays or videos for example, with the tools at hand in order to increase their own involvement in the increasingly technologized mediums of communication.
I like this idea, on the surface, because students should be aware of the ways they do and may be called upon to communicate in the twenty-first century. Also, I engage in these practices in my own personal and professional lives with this blog, YouTube, and Flickr. However, I first understood the basics of writing practices and composition before or in analog with my additionally technologized communication practices.
My belief is that a grounding in traditional writing practices and composition empowers the individual to translate and apply those to other means and mediums of communication. In the introductory writing classes, I feel that I not be meeting my students needs if I didn’t guide them towards an increased proficiency in writing before allowing them to use multimodal composition practices in the classroom. Analogously, a pilot must earn a single engine pilots license prior to earning a license in larger and multiple engine aircraft. Our students should safely pull out of a stall on a small Cesna before experiencing an F-15 flame out. Therefore, I assert that students are better prepared communicators if they build on tried-and-true translatable communicative practices before using expressive, yet not as directly translatable, modes of communication.
So what does this have to do with Vernor Vinge’s postsingularlity SF novel, Rainbows End (now available for free online here)? In the novel, Robert Gu, a former great poet in the last throws of a slow Alzheimer’s death, is resurrected through regenerative medical technologies. However, his disease has left a mark on his mind, and he has to relearn how to be a poet as well as learn about the changes in technologically mediated communicative practices. Toward this end, he enrolls in a high school where he works with a teenage student, Juan Orozco, to create a multimodal final project in “shop class” that involves dance, music, holographic projection, and poetry. There’s an exchange of ideas between the two characters–Gu introduces Juan to poetry and the power of the written word, and Orozco shows Gu the potential of story telling and art with the advances in technology during Gu’s illness.
For all of the good things in Vinge’s novel, his writing about the multimodal compositions fell flat for me. In fact, I cringed at the possibility that we’d move away from reading and writing within such a short time. With the rapid advances in technology, and technology’s relationship and impact on the classroom, it seems like there is not enough reflection taking place on its long term and post-graduation effects on our students. It’s one thing to write about how great this brave new world will be, but I question if that will be so.
Granted, I haven’t been in the classroom yet, and I know that a large part of my own developing ideas on teaching practices are borrowed from the ways that I was taught, but m greatest rebellious response during the past couple of weeks in Brian’s class has been in regard to multimodal composition. I don’t think it has a place in my introductory writing class, and I question to what extent I might employ it in higher level courses where students can demonstrate their ability to communicate effectively with the written word.
A final issue that I have with multimodal composition is the technical instruction aspect of it. I don’t do fucking tech support. In my previous life, prior to fully engaging my research interests in graduate school, I built more computers than I can count, I’ve repaired more Macs than I can imagine, and I gave phone, teletype, and email assistance to innumerable customers at the late, great Mindspring in Atlanta, Georgia. I didn’t sign on to pursue research and college teaching to help students learn how to use iMovie, much less the poorly designed Microsoft Movie Maker. I love technology, and it’s an integral part of my life, including two World of Warcraft accounts, a 30″ Apple Cinema Display and Mac Book Pro, iPhone, building a Media Center PC, blogging, and keeping my girlfriend’s ailing Sony Vaio alive while she studies for her comps, but I strongly insist on keeping that separate from my goal of enriching the lives of my students by challenging them to think deeply, imagine new possibilities, and effectively communicate through writing before moving up to multimodal composition practices.
Vinge’s _Rainbows End_ raised a lot of the same questions for me, and for what it’s worth, there is a lot of debate in composition literature about multimodal composition, esp. along the lines you raise. Should we be teaching students skills that will directly help them in their lives or should we stick to the possibly outdated skills that teach a cognitive perspective that is clearly still useful? There isn’t a clear answer, because this present moment is the first time an organized, professionalized class of writing instructors has had to deal with a paradigm shift in communicative technologies (from the book to the … screen?).
I’m on the fence with the issue, myself. I’m going to be including some multimedia assignments in my composition class this summer, because I think these skills are important, too. One thing you’ll find is that it’s very hard to make incoming college freshmen better at writing because American high schools produce some truly abysmal writers and some truly talented ones, so you have to help the slower students and risk losing the ones who do a good job.
The reason I’m including more new media in my course, however, is because American high schools do absolutely nothing to prepare students for composition within the media-saturated environment of contemporary life. I find, amongst college engineering students when I teach Technical Communications, that these people lack even basic computer problem solving skills (like getting files to class or converting to a different Word Document format). Moreover, what I find really troubling, is that they have no idea how to find the answers that they need (which gets back to Gu’s high school class in Vinge (asking the right questions)).
So, for me, my inclusion of some tech elements is to get student accustomed to using the computer to solve problems, be they written or “new” media. Also, the approach of teaching problem solving gets you out of having to do handholding. Instead, you can assign a manual as “reading” and have them do exercises for homework. That way, it isn’t all tech support.
But, I understand your frustration.
Hey Andrew–thanks for the reply and I particularly like your idea for manual readings (Has anyone read software manuals as literature yet? heh). Let me know how your multimedia assignments go in your composition class this summer. One thing we talked about in class yesterday was having traditional writing assignments early in the class and then moving into the multimodal stuff. Are you structuring the class this way, or will you rely heavily on multimedia assignments? Do you give your students a wide variety of options for those assignments or do you say this assignment is an audio essay and this other one is a video essay, etc.?
I’m going to transition into the multimedia stuff from trad assignments, yeah?
I think I’m going to give them a fairly wide berth but never deviate from writing, too much. What I’m going to ask them to do is think about the design of an object or sign from their daily lives that could be improved in order to be more effective. They can accomplish this however they want, but there will be some written component.
I’d I could go both ways. I think that multimodal composition would be a great auxillary method to use in the classroom, which is what I do. The problem with using it as the primary mode of teaching writing is that many of students, I would imagine, are familar with thise technology, in some format, through MySpace, YouTube, Facebook, texting, blogging, etc. I worry that the informality that usually accompanies the use of MySpace, etc. would translate onto the classroom, also. Many students are not particularly adept at writing as it is; if this would become the primary mode of writing, I worry that the average skill level would disappear even further.
However…
I also see this as a optimal opportunity for students to explore their perspectives while removing the the anxiety of academic writing. Similar to classroom discussion, multimodal composition could allow students to express themselves on topics they would feel uncomfortable with when writing an academic paper for a grade. As an auxiallary tool, it could extend dialogue beyond the classroom and allow students to engage and respond with alternative perspectives and opinions shared by other students. Also, as an ongoing project, I think that it could hold a level on interest for students that normal academic writing does not. Of course, like most things in the classroom, this depends on the teacher. If the teacher is not engaged in the project, as we all at one time or another have found out, it usually falls flat. However, a teacher’s enthusiasm and, above all else, equitable participation could make the project more memorable than an everyday writing comp class.
With regards to the tech support, I completely understand. However, you might need to simply devote an entire class to it. You could also try to elicit the help of a university or school computer lab that usually has some who is mildly tech savy. That could save you on t-support time.