Posted by: rajnisays on: October 15, 2008
Some find sher-o-shayari and poetry a thing for emotional people. I do agree that it is to some extent for emotional people. But only emotions are not sufficient to write them. It’s a creative art like any other art.
My favourite most verse is of Harivansh Rai Bachchan, father of Amitabh Bachchan
Drig dekh jahan tak paate hain,
Tam ka sagar lahrata hai
Phir bhi us paar khada koi,
Hum sabko kheench bulata hai
Mein aaj chala tum aaogi kal,
Parson sab sangi saathi
Duniya roti dhoti rahti,
Jisko jaana hai jaata hai
Mera to man hota dag mag,
Tat par ke hi halkoron se
Jab mein ekaaki pahunchunga,
Majhdhaar na jaane kya hoga
Is paar priye madhhu hai tum ho,
Us paar na jaane kya hoga
Drig-eyes, Tam-Darkness Madhu-it can be anything that gives pleasure
I find this a very good blend of all emotions in it love, fear of death, philosophy, joys of life etc. Man is mortal and its shown in it so beautifully.
Once I was bitten by the poetry bug. When was a teenager I used to be a shy, introvert and emotional gal. A small disagreement over matters used to be enough for me to cry my heart out (silly isn’t it? Although I have overcome this weakness but some viruses have still left in me :P )
It was my teenage then. I was in a gloomy mood one day (I don’t remember the reason actually but i had an argument with my sister I guess). I used to cry and forget things. But to my surprise I penned down the following poem, my first and last attempt on writing poem.
Ek chhat ke neeche utni duniya,
Jitney usme rahne waale
Ajnabi se lagne lagte,
Kabhi kabhi ye apne waale
Kahan wo dil ki baat kahenge,
Hain jaban par unke taale
Unko bas apne se matlab,
Wo kahan kisi ki poochne waale
Milte hi nazar pher lete hain,
Kabhi gale se lagne waale
Ajnabi se lagne lagte,
kabhi kabhi ye apne waale
I really wonder how I could write this poem. Because after this incident I have gone through so many emotional ups and downs like any other human being but I couldn’t be able to write a verse again. My parents say “thank god warna humein hi bore karti”. :P
1 | Rohit Tripathi
Ajnabi se lagne lagte,
kabhi kabhi ye apne waale
very true.. and b’ful lines… I hav also written a only hindi poem.. aur aaj sochta hu to mujhe bhi lagta hai ki arre yeh maine likhi :-)
catch it at http://rohittripathi.blogspot.com
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